Part 2 in our Writing For Artist Series
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Why Writing Clearly is Hard For Artists (and Other Humble People) & What You Can Do To Make It Easier
The first post in this series helped us understand how we confuse our readers.
Now we’ll explore two reasons why we write weird in the first place.
The first reason I want to talk about is one we can’t change.
The second reason is one that can be addressed, with great results over time.
Reason 1. We Write Weird Because We Think Weird
Creatives like you do amazing work for the well-being of the world. You translate soul into material form. And you do so in a way others can recognize on sight.
Think about it. That’s huge.
But in order for you to possess this superpower your brain may be “wired” differently than an accountant or professional copy writer. I know mine is.
Is your brain’s “first language” numbers? Doubtful right? You’re probably okay with that.
Then why can’t it also be fine if your first language isn’t words either?
Many of us creatives prefer to think in images. Visual artists often do. But we’re each unique.
Choreographers can form mental sentences made up of body movements. Musicians can think in sound. While assemblage artists like me think in objects.
My point is many of us don’t write well because… we don’t need to. Not in order to excel creatively and make the most out of our one of a kind mind.
Problem is we need to write well if we want others to hear about or buy what’s cascading out of that beautiful mind.
We can’t change how we’re wired. Nor would most of us want to.
If you have zero desire to work on your writing, don’t. I officially absolve you. Market with video. Or hire a writer. Or forget writing altogether, life’s too short. Make your art. Plant gladiolas. Volunteer with kids.
But if you want to explore making writing easier, read on.
So What The Heck Can We Do If We Need To Write Better?
We tackle reason number two.
Reason 2. We Write Weird On Purpose
I believe the writing of many creatives (and other nice people) lacks clarity. It’s not because we’re not smart. Quite the opposite. I think many of us intelligently design our sentences so people won’t understand them.
We unconsciously obscure our point on purpose.
What-what, Thea? Why on earth would we want not be understood?
Well, if you were born with less than a “Trumpian” sense of self-worth, you may fear being criticized, laughed at or judged if you come right out and say what you think about things.
It takes moxie and a bit of madness to write clearly.
If we verbally circle round and round to cover our tracks, we prevent the public from rifling through our underwear drawer and possibly laughing uproariously at what they find there.
I came up with my “unclear on purpose” theory after the first 20 deranged drafts of my thesis in grad school.
Apparently I reasoned (unconsciously at first) that if a professor didn’t understand my argument they couldn’t say it was wrong, or just plain garbage.
Solution? I had to take a chance on being understood. I learned to assert and defend my ideas. The world didn’t end. And the process helped me evolve as a writer and as a person.
My “unclear on purpose” theory has since been confirmed by several grad students and artists I have coached or edited with their own writing, since then.
Unclear writing often comes down to a fear of being judged.
“I went for years not finishing anything. Because, of course, when you finish something you can be judged.” – Erica Jong
Fear Factor For Artists
It’s terrifying to be ridiculed. It isn’t fun to worry about what people in authority will write in the margins of your world. Many of us get nauseous even imagining what skulking internet trolls might say.
Are you an artist who feels more vulnerable on the page than on the canvas? I get that.
I still struggle every day with the fear of writing clearly as well.
But you know 3 things I fear more?
1. I fear people falling asleep out of boredom and quietly drooling on top of my writing because I was too terrified to take a clear stand for anything.
2. I fear how I will feel about myself if I never take a chance on releasing just one glowing paper lantern of an original thought into the world, even if it’s only seen by a lone deer grazing on the side of a highway.
3. I fear never having gotten to help other folks who may benefit, even the tiniest bit, from my weird-ass take on things.
What do you fear not communicating while you’re running around here on Earth?
And how can someone begin the journey of writing with greater clarity?
One Way To Tackle Fear-Based Clarity Problems in Your Writing
Muster up enough self-love and self-confidence to look at your sentences and paragraphs and ask yourself:
‘Now what the hell am I really trying to say here?’
“Don’t try to figure out what other people want to hear from you; figure out what you have to say. It’s the one and only thing you have to offer.”– Barbara Kingsolver
Think to yourself, ‘How would I explain what I’m trying to say here on the phone to my close girlfriend who believes in me?’
One Solution: Call For Help
Better idea. Call that girlfriend (Or guy friend).
Scribble down what you manage to communicate to them that makes some sense. Do it while you’re on the phone, or you’ll lose it.
Tip: Pay even more attention to what your friend says back to you.
Certain friends know you better than you know yourself. They can often quickly and clearly summarize our “long road to nowhere” arguments in a single sentence.
Don’t be surprised to hear your friend answer: “Oh, so you’re just trying to say (x+ y= z.)
Your jaw may drop open because the very idea you have been in a three-day-oiled-pig- wrestling- match with — has just tripped off their tongue in 2 seconds.
My friends are used to me interrupting them on the phone, with: “Stop talking….. I’m writing that down………..I hate you…you’re a genius!”
Don’t forget to buy your friend a coffee.
But first, type up that phone gold. Put it in your bio, blog post, grant proposal or artist’s statement.
Leave in your personality. Leave out the long sentences.
Keep working on the idea that what you truly want to say, has value.
If you do, eventually you will be shocked to have your writing met with open arms, perhaps for the first time.
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Why You Should Let People Rifle Through Your Underwear Drawer:
If you want some backup getting your authentic inner self to match up with your writerly outer self, look at Carolyn See’s joyfully irreverent: Making A Literary Life: Advice For Writers and Other Dreamers. See tells all. It is one of my favorite non-fiction examples of what not caring about being judged on the page looks like.
Extra Writing Help from The Charmed Studio for Artists and Aspiring Writers: 5 Crazy-Good Writing Books I Wish Someone Told Me About Earlier.
Or forget books and pass on classes. Just write. A lot. You’ll get better.